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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
Last post by Ellen Fitz -
[Hirek tr'Aimne | Small Alley Just Shy of Transport Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Dumedion

The moment Talia's hand drifted toward the knife at her thigh, Hirek caught her wrist — not hard, just enough — and gave the smallest shake of his head. He kept his hand over hers on her thigh while his other hand came up over her ribs, and he pressed them both back into the recess of the passage, a space cut for one body and now holding two.

Footsteps. Two sets, unhurried. Citizens, not a patrol. The voices reached the mouth of the alley before the speakers did.

"...khre'vash," the first muttered. "Mnei t'Rihannsu saei rrhalla, mnei t'Rehmnau saei rrhalla, label thae, label thae, dosh."

HIire knew the universal translater would have issues with this dialect as it had been trained on Romulan standard and had not been given access to all the myriad of dialects that existed even within the capital. Likely, the translator whispered fragments against Talia's ear — rushing... Romulans... Remans... — and then most likely lost the thread entirely into a string of untranslated syllables. Hirek did not struggle to understand, however The dialect was western Dartha, near enough to his mother's dialect that the man's shorthand cost him nothing. Folding the sheet before the ink is dry, the fellow had said, or as close as the phrase carried — an old islander's grumble about work done too fast to hold. They stamp Romulan on one, Reman on the other, and call it settled.

The second voice snorted. "Dosh trhai. S'Shaenor tr'eiha, chulae tr'eiha, trhellhae tr'eiha."

The colonies will remember. Not a translation of the words so much as their spine — S'Shaenor was the deep frontier, and a Romulan who invoked it this way meant the old bloodlines out past the Neutral Zone who had never once done what Dartha told them. The colonies will remember they have pride. Every line will remember it remembers.

"Nnvei mnhei t'Rehmnau. Hru'hfirh Rihannsu, hru'hfirh Rehmnau, label thae — dosh."

The translator would've managed only ..respect..before giving up for good. Hirek, again, understood the meaning. No dignity in it — not for the Remans, not for us. Neither people were asked how the thing should begin. We were told we are one, and expected to applaud.

The first man clicked his tongue against his teeth, the sound every Romulan child learned meant *this ends badly*. "Aefvadh mnhei S'Shaenor sae'khora. Aefvadh mnhei t'Rehmnau eir'hinterr'hw' esta."

Wait until the colonies answer. Wait until every Reman who never bowed decides he still won't. And then, plainly, no idiom left to bury it in: "We have traded one civil war for another."

That last, the translator caught whole. It hung in the passage after the footsteps had gone.

Neither man had lowered his voice. Neither had imagined anyone listening — why would they, when they were only saying aloud what half the city had already thought and not yet dared to speak.

Hirek stayed still. One heartbeat, then another. He had spent decades teaching himself not to move on impulse, and the training held him now past the point of necessity — the voices had faded into the evening traffic, and still he waited, because nearly gone was not gone, and a man survived the difference. That his hands remained on her thigh, her ribs, that her back was still pressed against the wall, his own body shielding her from the world— he was aware of it. He was not in a particular hurry to correct it. He allowed himself the honesty of noticing that, and no more.

Only when the last echo had truly emptied did his hands leave her body. There was nowhere obvious to retreat to except a marginal space back considering the scant space in the alley, and for an instant neither of them moved. Then he shifted back that single pace and let what space there was to return.

"They were discussing the new government," he said quietly, once they were walking again. A faint, rueful thing crossed his face. "They voiced several concerns I happen to share. That reunification is being demanded rather than grown — that neither people was given the courtesy of learning to stand the sight of the other before being told they are now one." Another corner, another careful glance down it. "They expect the frontier colonies to refuse. And they suspect the loudest refusal won't come from the center of either society." He glanced at her. "It will come from the ones who have always lived at the edges of both."

A few more steps carried them out into broader streets, civilian traffic thickening beneath a violet sky, the landing beacons of the docking yards shimmering ahead.

Hirek slowed and nodded toward a row of public lavatories along the terminal wall. "There. You can change." His hand went into his jacket and came out with a flat data chit. "I still need the launch authentication codes." He looked toward the administrative office, figures moving behind lit windows. "A few minutes, no more."

Then he looked back at her, the dry humor returning to the corner of his mouth as his eyes drifted to the bundled dress. "And if you can manage it — try not to leave every Romulan in the terminal wondering why a Starfleet pilot is wearing one of the island provinces' finer cloths."
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 02 [ 945 hrs ] Everything's Fine, So Far...
Last post by ob2lander961 -
[ Ens. Via "DixeBee" Wix | Cockpit, Wolf-04 | FAB| USS Theurgy ]
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"Nope...Nada...Nope...". Via casually flipped through her digital album, music blaring for a microsecond before being passed for another track, never quite able to settle on anything.

"NopeNopeNope..." She was completely in her own world, going through the motions of the pre-flight checklist as she did hundreds of times before, completely missing the fact she was next in the launch rotation. "Nopenopenope- Oh shit" Suddenly, a fast electric beat undertoned by a flurry of drums which filled the cockpit. Via started moving with the beat, slowy feeling the catchy tune as it progressed. "Okay" she said with an aura of enthisasum. As the music blared a very subtle dull knocking eired under her hearing. Still focused on powering up her Valravn Via ignored the oddity until it became more insistant. It prompted her to withdraw her attention on her prodecures to look for where it was coming from and quickly she saw one of the maintainers knocking her cockpit window with a "what the hell" type of look all over his face. "

"Are you good?!" the muffled andorian voice barely made it through the glass only to get further distorted by the loud music which was still playing.

"Air is good?!" Via yelled and gave a thumbs up

"No, are you good?!" the maintainer responed with a thumbs up in an attempt to clarify his previous question realizing Via couldn't hear him clearly. "Tower has been calling you! Turn down the music!"

"What?!" The young pilot still couldn't hear. "Tower says I am good?!"

"No! Turn. Down. The Music!" The Andorian reaffirmed pointing to her cockpit in the general area of her joystick.

"Oh! I am clear to take off?"

"No! TURN DOW-"

"Alright! See y'alls asses later" Via gave a curt salute to the Andorian as she engaged the engine and started to take off, jamming to her music as the craft lifted off the ground.

Luckily the flight deck was clear, Via was able to move into position and quickly launch out of the FAB diving straight into the deep black of space with full afterburners haphazardly.

[Holding pattern near SB 234]

Via's mouthed the words of the song as she speed to the rally point. All things considered she was in a good mood. Considering the last couple days she enjoyed the respite of having a simple escort mission with one of her best friends Shadow distincing herself from all the death, destruction, and pain that still was in the air on the Theurgy.

Not paying attention to the time, she overshot the rally point she was supposed to hold at buzzing right over Wolf 4. The young pilot was utterly sucked into the music. It took Talia going inverted and meeting her cockpit to cockpit to again her attention.

"Shitballs!" Looking up she jumped at the sudden sight of the Valkyire. Her instinctive response was to flip Shadow off, especially after recieving both the visual and coded message to turn down her music. "Bitchass..." she resigned. The young pilot fixed her comms and turn down her music to a dull drone, before communicating to her wingman. "Y'all's asses ain't got any taste and now y'all are hatin'." she looked back to her RIO "and..ain't no one likes a hater. I already gotta deal with Beachhead." the lack of a quipy response from him made Via curious. "Hey, why your ass silent?"

The RIO mouthed a response but nothing audible came out. It looked like he said "I've been talking this entire time, or I really want some wine. Via couldn't tell."

"Whatever..." Via dismissed the oddity. "Anyway, Shadow?" She redirected her attention back to her "Girl, you ass overshot the rally point. Now we got to bring our asses all the way back. Did you not pay attention to the briefin'?" She said playfully and completely oblivious to her actions.

Via turned off her afterburners and slowed down to cruising speed, heading back to where Shadow was previously in a holding pattern. "Whose' ass are we meetin' here again? We should start chargin' latinum for these kind of missions...."
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
Last post by Dumedion -
[Ens. Talia "Shadow" Al-Ibrahim | Hidden Passage beneath the Diplomatic Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Ellen Fitz

And there it was — the unspoken thing — the tension between them that had existed from almost the first time they'd laid eyes on each other; something that had only grown despite her best efforts to deny it. Talia felt its weight in the air and in her chest, impossible to ignore simply due to the effort required to do so. The fact that Hirek hadn’t pushed the issue — hadn’t utilized his charming, innate ability to infuriate, confound and arouse all at once — didn’t help. Even as the tips of her ears and cheeks flushed with heat, thankfully unnoticed in the dark, Shadow held the feeling at arms length out of necessity.

She focused her attention everywhere else but him as he paused to dig around in the satchel; easing her heartrate down with a few measured breaths — to reign her emotions in even tighter. Still, her mind raced with the consequences of what she’d just chosen to do: if things went south during the talks, Talia wouldn’t be there. She’d left her post, without warning or cause, and potentially endangered the mission.

That realization proved sobering, and the result felt like a splash of ice-cold water. Almost instantly, Talia clamped that train of thought down, forced it aside from her mind; if, if, if…the choice was made. Whatever came from it after, she’d deal with it — after.

All of this occurred in the time it took Hirek to hand over a bundle of cloth. Not for the first time in her life (and certainly not the last), Talia wished she could just stop thinking so much. It was just so….exhausting.

Despite it all, her lips curled softly at Hirek's words as Talia examined his ‘solution’; despite the inability to truly feel the fabric through the gloves of her exosuit, it was almost weightless, and clearly made with care. Her eyes admired the color, how it shifted and moved, almost iridescent — like the feathers of a hummingbird on Earth, or the scales of the giant fish-predators they had hunted on the holodeck. She held the dress up, carefully, to avoid fouling it upon the wet stone.

Her smile grew into a genuine smile and a nod of agreement followed, as she carefully folded the garment back into a more manageable arrangement.

“We certainly did, didn’t we?” The dress wasn’t very practical, not at the moment anyway, but Talia sincerely hoped it fit her as beautifully as it looked. “Given our history, I wont promise anything,” she smiled at him, “but I’ll try to return it in one piece. Thank you.”

The temptation to voice all the questions in the world sprung to mind then, but she locked those down as well. What mattered was getting to the transport, to a place and time where those conversations could take place.

They walked. Hirek led by a pace, Talia a close step behind. She followed his movements while her attention surveyed their surroundings, noting how he stuck to the shadows, or near a wall, the minute pauses at a threshold or before a corner…always assessing. He made it look effortless, something naturally done without a shred of conscious effort; for her part, Talia couldn’t help but feel like a bumbling toddler in his shadow — a walking advertisement of fuckery-afoot for anyone and everyone to see. He’d clearly chosen his path carefully, though; Talia hadn’t seen a soul yet, even as they crossed across streets and ducked into other alleys, passed what looked like merchant stalls and closed shops.

Once they’d entered into a courtyard, the roof open to the sky, Talia realized how fast the daylight had faded; the buildings had grown tinted in gold and amber, the sky bruised purple. Night was approaching, which would only make her stand out more. Talia tapped out a command on her wrist PaDD in a quick series of muted tones, killing power to her flightsuit mid-stride; the lights vanished instantly, along with its artificial strength. She didn’t break stride however, and only arched a brow at his questioning look, a gesture that told him enough without either of them needing to speak: she could handle the added weight, so long as their destination wasnt too far off.

Suddenly, Hirek dipped into a passage Talia hadn’t noticed, pulling her once more into something like an embrace as he moved without warning. This time, she couldn’t help herself from uttering a surprised gasp — more an alarmed squeak than anything — even as his hand covered her mouth with urgency. He held her close, pressing them both into the wall, as Talia turned her head and alarm filled eyes back and up to him.

Then, she heard the approaching footsteps.

Talia held the bundled dress in one hand, close to her chest; the other hand drifted to the concealed combat blade sheathed within the armored section of her outer thigh, which opened with a soft mechanical click — to grip the hilt of the blade. Then she nodded her readiness to Hirek, body tensed like a coil, ready to follow his next move.
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
Last post by Ellen Fitz -
[Hirek tr'Aimne | Hidden Passage beside the Diplomatic Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Dumedion

Hirek had expected questions. Suspicion, at least — a dozen sharp inquiries in that precise Federation manner where the words stayed polite, and the meaning was an interrogation all the same. He had expected her to challenge his assumptions, question the wisdom of bringing an entire compound to a state of controlled panic. What he had not expected was silence.

Not that Talia was incapable of it. She knew when to listen; she'd proven that on the island, in the simulation, after she'd finally stopped fighting long enough to let him plait her hair. But he had spent enough time reading her now to know the difference between her professional quiet and this. This was hesitation. The dim glow of her exosuit caught it as they moved — the brief tightening at her mouth, the flex and release of her fingers, the flicker of frustration when she nearly spoke and then swallowed it. Her hand had even started toward him before she caught it. Decades of watching for physical tells, most of them among people who would have killed him for noticing, and here the woman broadcast every one and still managed to hold the important thing back.

There was something almost amusing in that. Somewhere in the Federation an officer was surely lecturing a room about Romulans and their constitutional inability to say what they felt, and here was a human doing precisely the same — hiding the exposed piece, pretending it wasn't there until it stopped being dangerous. She had acquired the instinct without ever setting foot on Romulus.

He was, admittedly, disappointed. Not enough to regret anything. But he knew what she had nearly said, because he had nearly said something himself, and the more sensible part of him — the part that had kept him alive through three Tal Shiar regimes — was grateful neither of them had. A dark alley beside a turbulent compound, the government reshaping by the hour, was the worst conceivable place for that particular conversation. So when she finally broke the silence — an apology, a promise not to slow him down — he let it pass. For once he didn't push.

He looked over at her and chuckled, quiet, more amused than mocking. She asked about a cloak, then, or a change of clothes. The request was so perfectly practical after everything else that he nearly smiled. Of course. He stopped and reached for the knapsack across his shoulder.

"No cloak," he admitted, and rummaged briefly. "But I have something better."

It was likely not what she expected. A dress — deep purple, the fabric catching the blue light of the exosuit and shifting as it moved. Light as breath, woven from the silken fiber of a plant that grew only in the hedgerows of his islands. Not the sort of thing one purchased just anywhere, as there was not a lot of it available for purchase. The people of his islands cut and dyed the cloth themselves, and he’d taken part in the process more than once. This dress in particular, he'd packed it before leaving Theurgy for reasons he had not fully examined at the time. The same hands that blended the ale and pressed the flowers into her braid now offered her the dress, knowing that she had no concept of its value or origins.

He held it out. "Try this." His eyebrow lifted. "And before you ask — yes, I am aware that handing a Starfleet officer traditional Uluma cloth while fleeing a diplomatic compound is not the conventional solution. But I believe we left conventional behind us mere minutes after we first met."
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
Last post by Dumedion -
[Ens. Talia “Shadow” Al-Ibrahim | Diplomatic Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Ellen Fitz

She didn’t interrupt as they walked; between the effort required to match Hirek’s pace with significantly shorter legs while simultaneously maintaining the appearance of casual effortlessness – not to mention keeping her eyes moving at everyone and everything else – Talia listened and let her expression speak for itself.

He likely didn’t intend to, but to Talia’s ears, he sounded almost…academic; a teacher delivering a pointed explanation to a student’s half-thought-out question, when the answer itself should have been painfully obvious. Frustration bloomed, directly entirely at herself; the experience gap between them couldn’t have been more clearly defined in that moment – practically a lifetime of perspective and insight into a world and culture Talia was utterly ignorant of.

Shadow accepted it, processed it; filed it away. The soles of his flats slapped along the marble floor alongside the thumps of her boots while Hirek continued: he spoke of options that had become available, and the unspoken decision that would need to be made. She felt herself frown, entirely too close to a pout. They had already said their goodbyes, after a fashion, before the Triangle; somehow, the possibility of having to do that again filled her with a feeling too unfamiliar to be defined. That sensation alone, and the fact that it bloomed into existence in the first place, distracted the pilot enough to nearly roll an ankle - fortunately, the lapse went unnoticed, or if Hirek saw it, he made no comment.

Shadow didn’t fully understand what he meant by the Citadel or the Tal Shiar 'being scattered' and filed the question on her lips away for later; that didn’t explain what trouble he had caused, either, but she found it easier to simply trust that Hirek wouldn’t jeopardize his kin and home on a whim. A brief fount of relief crashed against the other feeling in her stomach.

Then there came the ruckus behind them, and Talia turned out of instinct; the next second, she was pulled aside without warning - then ushered into a passage in the rock – all of it in the time it took her heart to pound five times. She stood there, in the dark, dimly lit by the blue/white diodes of her exosuit, trying to breathe as quietly as possible in the few seconds before Hirek laid out her choices.

When he smiled, Shadow couldn’t stop one side of her lips from curling up in response, even as he walked away; she was a horrible liar – always had been – and even worse at storytelling. The odds of her making it back without looking blatantly suspicious were hilariously low. Why the hell should she go back anyway? To face death by sheer boredom?

The choice was made.

“Okay stop,” Talia whispered, then started after Hirek. “Please, just a moment,” she added, even quieter and quite serious as she drew closer. “Listen,” her hand reached out to him, to slow and turn him towards her. In the dark, she couldn’t help but notice how the dim light of the exosuit’s various arrays and electronics reflected in his eyes. She’d always struggled to hold his gaze before; now it wasn’t difficult at all. It was almost...

Talia managed to say his name, then her lips worked wordlessly, almost comically, for a moment, before the pilot shook visibly to regain some semblance of herself.  The words were there, but almost as soon as she started Talia realized that everything she wanted to tell him could wait until they had safely departed for the Isles. “S-sorry…it can wait,” Shadow sighed, frustrated and embarrassed at herself. “Lead the way. I’ll try not to slow you down,” was added after a step back, giving him room to move, then walked beside him down the dark tunnel, with only the sound of their steps along the wet stone between them – with the dull buzz of her armor – for several seconds.

“Don’t suppose you brought a cloak or change of clothes, did you,” Talia asked with a wave at herself with a humorless chuckle. “Perhaps something a bit more inconspicuous than an armored flightsuit?” 
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
Last post by Ellen Fitz -
[Hirek tr'Aimne | Diplomatic Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Dumedion

Hirek didn't glance toward the pair beneath the archway. He'd counted them within four paces of the door — along with the woman studying a fountain that required no study, the gardener who hadn't touched a plant in ten minutes, and the courier who had passed them twice going the same direction. In his grandfather's day the Tal Shiar would have used the courier once and burned him.

"Of course they're watching us," he said. "Why wouldn't they be?"

He kept the pace brisk, weaving them through a garden where sculpted hedges and ancient trees swallowed the noise of the compound. Continental stock, all of it, planted three centuries ago by someone who'd wanted the capital's taste on an island governor's grounds and pruned now by people who no longer knew how.

"This is the first time in our planet's history that we've had this many Federation members walking openly through Romulus. The government is in flux. The Citadel has been gutted." His jaw tightened. Rubble, and it still wasn't enough — but it was a start. "For the first time in living memory, Remans are walking the streets without chains or hiding in the shadows. And the people responsible for accelerating all of that—" He cast her a sidelong look. "—are us. Theurgy."

Her frustration sat on her openly, the way most things did. He'd told her once that she wasn't dense, only impulsive and hot-headed, and he'd meant it as praise, and she hadn't taken it that way.

"Only hours ago the Federation and the Empire were stumbling through a détente that nearly collapsed into war. Now everyone's asking the same question: what comes next." He shook his head. "If Intelligence weren't watching every move we made, Romulus wouldn't deserve to exist as an empire. We'd deserve to become a Klingon client state. Only lax, naïve dimwits stop spying on foreign powers at a moment like this."

There was no outrage in it. Governments survived this way or they didn't survive. He and his parents had made their reports weekly for three years, standing in a grey office in the capital describing which market they'd bought fish at, and the Tal Shiar clerk had written it down.

"As for me." He exhaled. "I don't know yet. The new government has petitioned me to represent their interests aboard Theurgy." He heard himself offering that and was startled at the ease of it. Everything else here was new. Perhaps truth could be. "My old position at the College has opened. They want me back — there'll be an influx of Reman students among the Romulans, and someone has to teach them. And my cousin informs me an open border means our ale sales increase, which means our competitors increase, and we haven't blended anything new in years. She'd like me to stay and see to it."

He shrugged. "Which is precisely why I'm going home."

The path narrowed, hemmed in by flowering vines climbing centuries-old stone. Uluma rock, hauled here for that same governor's vanity. He knew the grain of it by feel.

"I need to see what's left. Check on my family. Figure out where everyone stands." His eyes swept the garden ahead. "And with the Citadel mostly rubble and the Tal Shiar scattered—" another shrug, "—your being on my island won't create any damage my own actions haven't already caused."

They rounded the last bend toward the outer perimeter. Then, almost on cue — shouting erupted behind them. Voices. Running feet. A crash that pulled heads throughout the gardens toward the inner courtyards.

Hirek moved. His arm slipped around Talia's waist, pulling her against him as though they were another couple startled by the noise, and he pivoted them into the wall, shoulder against weathered stone. She didn't tense, or she tensed and let it go so fast he nearly missed it. His thumb found the hollow beneath a carved relief. A soft click, and the wall rotated.

"Move." He guided her through.

The wall swung shut behind them with barely a whisper, and the darkness took the garden with it. A narrow alley ran the length of the compound's exterior, smelling of wet stone and something fermenting badly. Hirek let out a slow breath and listened for several seconds before speaking again.

"I've been rushing because that diversion was timed. If I hadn't been in position when it came, we lost the window." He adjusted the strap of the satchel on his shoulder, then gestured back at the concealed wall. "So. From here, you have two options." He pointed down the alley toward the distant street. "Circle back to the main entrance, find a way inside, and invent a believable explanation for how you ended up outside the compound." A pause, and he didn't bother restraining the smile. "Or." He started walking the other way. "You come with me."

"I've hired private transport. Once we're aboard and clear, I'll notify the mission lead through a secure channel — exactly where you are, and that you're with me. No surprises. No one wondering whether you've been kidnapped." He looked over at her. "The choice is yours, Talia."
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Main OOC Board / Re: Course Correction: Discussing the Future of USS Theurgy
Last post by Ellen Fitz -
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In preparation for next week's meeting, I used AI to summarize the points as they've been made to this point (I used AI because I am multitasking today with a ton of projects, but I wanted to create a summary list that can be a TL;DR for folks just jumping in). I will add my own thoughts as well, as this is posted (because I'm also a writer here), and they will be marked with (( ... ))


After reviewing the discussion thread, there are a number of recurring themes where several writers independently arrived at similar conclusions. Below is a consolidated summary organized by topic.

Overall Consensus

The discussion is largely optimistic rather than pessimistic. Almost everyone emphasizes that:
* Theurgy is worth saving.
* The community itself remains its greatest strength.
* The current decline is viewed as structural rather than personal.
* Writers want simplification rather than abandonment.
* Nearly everyone supports significant changes instead of minor adjustments.
((It has been stated that RL happens and I would add that the majority of the writers on this site are of a certain age currently and after a certain point in life RL gets immensely more complicated. Not trying to say that life ISN'T complicated at younger ages, but the pulls from aging parents/siblings/children is significantly less when you are younger and this is a part of the writing on here that has yet to be clearly stated. I do appreciate how it has been stated that RL should not be seen as a burden to apologize for and then you feel guilty for not keeping up. I agree with that, and would add that when it comes to a community of writers, it is important that if/when you do have to step back because of RL you understand that the story continues without you and you need to be okay with that. You should also NOT volunteer your character or get involved with a thread if you know that you won't be able to commit. Wait until you can, unless you're willing to let things pass you by and you do then have to read a ton to catch up in order to get back in. This part of writing in a community is inevitable if you can't log in regularly. It is a part of the responsibilty of a writer in a forum to keep up.))

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Story Direction

## Strong consensus: The current Infested storyline has run its course.

Repeated observations include:

* It has lasted for many years.
* The original architect is no longer present.
* It has become increasingly difficult to manage.
* New writers face an enormous amount of history.
* Existing writers struggle to remember all the moving parts.
* The story rarely feels like it reaches meaningful milestones.
* The endless nature of the conflict reduces motivation.

Many people specifically suggested:

* Finish it.
* Wrap it up.
* Shelf it.
* Soft reboot.
* Begin a new major narrative.
((I would add that we keep the narrative as it is and we use the next episode as a way of stepping away from it while respecting what's been built over the years, the very fact that this site is called uss-theurgy.com, and all the work that has gone into the art and character creation.))

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Desire for a cleaner narrative

Common opinions:

* Reduce complexity.
* Reduce simultaneous plot threads.
* Make stories easier to follow.
* Make new writers capable of joining without years of homework.
((There are already TL;DR summaries of past episodes that can be read to get a bird's eye view of the story and canon. This is what I used to get caught up when I joined and then I followed-up with talking directly with basically every writer on the board directly, getting to them them as a person as well as their characters. The most recent episode was an experiment that AL had started and we saw through, and I think we can all agree that the separation of the ship and pursuing different missions was difficult to keep up with and play out, especially with the in-game time and out-of-game time constraints. However, prior episodes did have simultaneous plot threads for the main storyline, and that has been the trend from the beginning, as that allows for different writers and departments to accomplish different aspects of the story. This is also what the story prompts is about too. However, I agree in the separation of the ship that makes it impossible for supplemental threads.))

One comparison made: Joining now feels like jumping into DC Comics where reading multiple series is required just to understand Batman.

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More Star Trek

Several writers expressed wanting stories centered around classic Star Trek themes:

More:

* exploration
* diplomacy
* science
* mysteries
* ethical dilemmas
* character interaction
((consequences of the actions taken in the story so far, we need that day of reckoning!!)

Less:

* constant warfare
* endless combat
* galaxy-ending threats

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Possible future directions suggested

Ideas proposed include:

* Finish current story then reset after Nemesis
* Enterprise era
* Lost Era
* TMP era
* TNG era
* completely new future timeline
* Andromeda galaxy
* temporal reboot
* time jump
* alternate timeline
* post-Infested galaxy
* smaller-scale exploration
((I love the Andromeda galaxy and would add that the next episode is an opportunity to have that and we keep the Theurgy in all its largeness specifically for the purpose of onboarding, so folks who onboard have been there all along, and not necessarily in stasis. The writer would just start writing and can talk to other writers prior to posting to establish relationships if they want or they can just start from scratch. They can also wake up from stasis as well, if they want, and we can have Andromeda characters too (just like Neelix hoo ah!))

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Story Complexity

This was probably the single largest recurring complaint.

Writers repeatedly mentioned:

* too many concurrent threads
* difficult to know where characters are
* difficult to know what is happening
* too many story branches
* too much required reading
* difficult to keep momentum

Several admitted this complexity directly impacts their motivation to write.
((I would add that this last episode is not the norm. I wasn't here for a terribly long time before AL left, but I was here long enough to know that the experiment of this last episode was an exception to the norm.))

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Time Progression

Nearly everyone discussed time.

Common complaints:

* in-game time moves far too slowly
* years of real life equal only weeks or months in-game
* character growth becomes impossible
* relationships cannot realistically develop

Suggested solutions:

* allow significant time skips between episodes
* have "blank" periods between missions ((already do with the interregnum and epilogue and etc))
* broad seasonal/monthly progression
* maintain chronological consistency without excessive precision
* permit off-screen growth

One person also defended maintaining enough time tracking to avoid characters existing in multiple places simultaneously.

Overall consensus: Time should remain organized, but progress much faster.

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Posting Expectations

Opinions differed somewhat.

### One camp

Suggested:

* eliminate posting requirements
* simply remove inactive writers after several months

### Larger middle ground

Suggested: Maintain expectations but simplify them.

Ideas included:

* 48–72 hour response windows
* skip absent writers rather than freezing threads
* warnings before inactivity
* inactive status instead of removal
* maintain writing momentum
((partially because we have RL obligations of a wide variety and complexity, I believe we have to have a schedule for posting. Be it everyone understands that the main story plot will progress by the third Thursday of every month or everyone is expected to post at least ONCE A WEEK, we have to have a schedule to keep to more so than a number of posts))

Another opinion: Maintain posting expectations because they preserve story continuity.

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Character Creation

One of the strongest areas of agreement.

Current process described as:

* too slow
* too bureaucratic
* waiting months
* dependent on every GM reviewing

Common suggestions:

* one GM approval
* trusted senior player approval ((I'd say more feedback, not approval. Approval should remain with GM alone))
* much faster turnaround
* remove unnecessary gatekeeping

Goal: Get writers into stories quickly.

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New Writer Onboarding

Almost unanimous agreement.

Suggestions:

* simplify onboarding
* reduce waiting
* assign mentors ((I would add that all current writers are mentors. Period. You get assigned mentors who are in your department.)
* help writers enter active threads quickly
* answer questions immediately
* improve accessibility
* make Discord more welcoming ((I also like the idea of having a limited access Discord role for potential new writers))
* advertise for new writers
((To this I would add that I use my DeviantArt to playfully advertise, yes via AI art, and more folks can use their already established social media or art or whatever platforms to advertise as a grassroots initiative starting...NOW without having to wait for things to get figured out.))


One simple recommendation: We need new blood. Advertise.

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Character Ownership

If a writer leaves:

* their characters leave
* no inheritance
* no transferring ownership
((I am also in favor of no character inheritance. I know this makes me rather hypocritical since I inherited Cross, however I took him over to help a writer keep the relationship developing and to help with the senior positions, more so than being attracted to him. It has taken time and effort for me to learn him and love writing him (which I do) but an inherited character is such a strange thing when you look at it from the creative process of writing with a community. In some cases, people feel pigeon-holed into maintaining what was (I somewhat felt that) and then they stagnate and lose motivation. And if we are so strong with AI being about stealing, then I would say that this is a similar situation as this character was created by someone else. )) 

Reasoning: Characters belong to their creators.

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New Character Restrictions

Several writers believe: Current restrictions discourage creativity.

Suggestions:

* let active writers create characters when inspiration strikes
* reduce approval requirements
* maintain activity requirements only for leadership positions
((I would add that if you create a character you have to post as that character at least once a month in order to maintain that character otherwise you run the risk of having that character offed))

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Senior Staff Expectations (In-Game Characters)

Suggestions included:

Department heads should:

* remain active
* help coordinate departments
* function almost like assistant GMs
* provide guidance

Captain specifically:

* must remain active
* must visibly lead the ship
((needs to be fallible and real and an actual character and not just a caricature. This applies to all senior staff positions. They should all be approachable by new writers both in game and out of game, and be willing to write outside their department))

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Ship Size

A more divisive topic.

One proposal:

Abandon the enormous colony ship.

Reasons:

* too many NPCs required
* difficult to populate
* promotional assets unavailable
* difficult to manage

Alternative suggestions:

* smaller ship
* Akira-class
* more manageable crew

Others strongly opposed abandoning Theurgy entirely because of its identity and history.
((I think it depends on what we do for the next episode and story. If we need a larger ship for the purpose of onboarding characters (i.e., we're in Andromeda but we want Federation characters))

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Character Development

Strong agreement.

People want:

* slower personal moments
* friendships
* relationships
* departmental interactions
* science
* diplomacy
* everyday ship life

rather than:

* constant battle
((I came in on two battle threads, Cross was literally in the captain's chair on the Praxis mission, and Enyd was getting on a shuttle heading to Qo'Nos to confront the Infested. I don't say that to say I want more battle. I also prefer EVERYTHING other than battle, with a little battle involved. For whatever reason, AL had two battle heavy episodes planned back-to-back before he left. However, even with that I was able to develop a lot using supplemental threads and story prompts, and we always have that option.))

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Artwork

Mixed opinions.

### One side

Reduce emphasis.

Arguments:

* writing matters more
* art should never delay writing
* art is optional

### Middle position

Keep one reference image.

Allow:

* drawings
* 3D models
* AI art
* photomorphs

Reduce obsession with:

* face claims
* voice claims


### Another position

Face claims remain useful for visual consistency.
((should allow face claims from deceased characters))

Overall: Art should support writing—not become a barrier to it.

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NSFW Writing

Two posters explicitly stated they would like it to remain permitted.

No objections were posted in the thread.

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Community Culture

Repeated themes:

* constructive criticism is healthy
* avoid blame
* focus on solutions
* preserve friendships
* preserve collaborative spirit
* remember why people joined

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Leadership

Several comments indirectly addressed leadership.

Suggestions include:

* faster decision making
* fewer approval bottlenecks
* clearer organization
* greater availability from leadership
* distribute responsibility among department heads ((within reason, because part of the problem we've had to this point since AL left is delegation of responsibility. Yes, having more buy-in and consensus is great within reason, but for momentum and development you need one head, not many, for strategic decisions. Saying this specifically as a writer who also had a character stagnate for awhile before she was onboarded (Ehfva))

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Areas of Broad Agreement

The following ideas appeared multiple times across different writers:

* End or substantially conclude the Infested storyline.
* Simplify the overall narrative.
* Reduce story complexity.
* Make onboarding dramatically faster.
* Reduce approval bottlenecks.
* Allow faster character creation.
* Make time advance more naturally.
* Increase opportunities for character development.
* Include more exploration and science.
* Reduce reliance on constant combat.
* Improve accessibility for new writers.
* Recruit additional writers.
* Reduce barriers created by artwork requirements.
* Preserve the community even if the setting changes.

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Primary Areas of Disagreement

Only a handful of subjects produced meaningful differences of opinion:

### Keep or replace the USS Theurgy

* Some advocate moving to a smaller ship.
* Others argue the ship is central to the sim's identity.

### Hard reset vs. soft reset

* Some favor a complete restart.
* Others prefer an in-universe explanation (time jump, temporal shift, alternate timeline) that preserves character development.

### Posting rules

* Some favor eliminating them.
* Most prefer simplified, more flexible expectations rather than removing them entirely.

### Artwork requirements

* Some would remove them almost entirely.
* Others want at least one visual reference while broadening acceptable art styles.

Overall, the discussion reflects a high degree of alignment on the need for structural simplification, faster onboarding, renewed focus on character-driven Star Trek storytelling, and reducing administrative friction, while differing primarily on *how* to implement those changes without losing Theurgy's identity.
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Interregnum 02-03 S2 / Re: Day 01 [2100hrs] When All is Stretched Thin
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[Ens. Talia “Shadow” Al-Ibrahim | Diplomatic Quarter, Dartha | Romulus] Attn: @Ellen Fitz
 
[Earlier…]

They’d all been briefed on what to expect, and what had been expected of them in turn; Shadow, being who she was, had listened carefully, while others…well, it seemed no one could hold Via’s attention for very long. Duchess had spoken her piece; the gist of which had been simple enough to understand: be prepared to be constantly monitored, and act accordingly. It seemed easy enough in theory. After all, Talia and the other Wolves hadn’t come to talk, they’d come to make sure the people that wanted to talk got the chance to do so. The opposite delegation seemed to understand that well enough; no one had even acknowledged the pilots after they’d arrived, which presented a very specific problem – boredom.
 
Thirty minutes into the “talks”, Talia realized why Janus had sent her, DixieBee, and poor Beachhead: he knew it would bore him to tears. She couldn’t really begrudge him though, because if it had been her call, she would have done the same thing.

An hour in, Talia started to pace, then explore. The compound didn’t seem like the sort of building one utilized to greet off-world visitations, or diplomacy; to her eyes, it looked and felt like a museum, or a tomb, or perhaps both. Furnishings were sparse, the halls and corridors empty; the black lined marble (flecked with green) looked ancient, and every minor movement or sound above a whisper echoed off the surrounding stone. It felt like a prison,  or a maze; the few Romulans she passed gave her no attention at all, save for a glance and half-hearted smiles.

Yeah, time for some air.

It wasn’t long after that, Talia found a balcony.

The view was impressive. The city was vast, cut into the hills along the fork of a river, its towers a million shades of white, grey, and green in the sunlight. Beyond the high-rises, faint in the distance, the crags of mountains rose towards the clouds. A sea of grass surrounded the compound, meticulously manicured, dotted with trimmed hedges and small fruit trees centered around a fountain pool of dull silver, large enough to land a runabout in with room to spare.

The flags dominated the scenery; everywhere Talia looked, emerald fabric flapped in the light breeze. Banners hung from the domed caps of buildings. Icons rendered in stone, in metal, jutted proudly into the sky atop arches, landing platforms, industrial sectors and marketplaces: all styled in the same image of the great Imperial raptor. For several long moments, Talia raised her hand to shield her eyes from the sun’s glare and searched the skies, hoping to see a live one. Soon enough, she became so engrossed that she lost track of time.

“Looking for something specific,” a voice suddenly asked, and Shadow spun to face its owner: a Romulan male, clad in the uniform of the Empire’s navy. His hair was shorn, black, faded upon the sides; his face was clean, imperious – a life-long soldier’s appearance, one unable to keep the sneer from his lips or tone. “Perhaps I can assist,” he continued with a cold smile and a gentle shrug.

“Oh,” Talia swallowed, “uh…raptors?” Her index finger pointed up to the sky, which in hindsight, she realized, must have looked ridiculously idiotic.

The Romulan’s brow bounced with a smirk as he held his hands clasped before him. “You won’t see any here, I’m afraid. They tend to avoid the cities,” he paused to nod towards the distant mountain range, then fixed her with his cold, black eyes. “They prey upon the furred mammals of the wild, you see; vile, mangy creatures have no place in civilized society. Also, given the fact that none have been sighted in many a year, I fear you search in vain, little wolf,” he added pointedly, nodding to the sqaudron badge upon her armor.

The insult was so overt, so obvious, Talia wondered for a moment if he had meant it as a joke; the haughty curl of his lips and sheer arrogance in his tone said otherwise. For her part, she managed to keep from clenching her jaw but couldn’t stop her eyes from narrowing in irritation. “I see,” the pilot murmured, then moved to step around him back into the empty corridor, only for the Romulan to block her with a step.

“Forgive my manners,” he spoke in a tone that suggested the man couldn’t care less. “The niceties should always be observed; I am Sub-Commander J’arun, Xarl Squadron, of the Okhala Thrai.”

Talia shrugged, confused and repelled at the same time. She took a step back, then introduced herself in turn. “Have we met?”

J’arun ignored the question to snort as he turned away. “An ensign,” he sneered, then laughed mirthlessly as Shadow folded her arms across her armored chest. “As a matter of fact, we have – a matter of days ago. You recall an engagement with an Imperial carrier, surely,” the Romulan asked, then gestured to himself. “I led one of the squadrons.”

“Yeah, I remember,” Shadow’s eyes hardened at him.

“I see that you do,” J’arun’s face and tone lost any semblance of warmth – pretense or otherwise. “Take care to mind yourself during your stay, wont you? I do look forward to meeting you in the void again; I’d hate for you to miss such an educational experience.”

“Don’t fucking threaten me you – “

“Threaten,” J’arun interrupted with a heartless chuckle, “not at all, you simple creature; that was a warning. Call it a…diplomatic overture, if you like,” he sneered again, then slowly backed away. “This has been most amusing. Do pass along my compliments to your superiors, won’t you? You’ve made them very proud, no doubt.”

Talia waited in the open air for several minutes after he’d left, fuming, before she returned inside.

[An hour later…]

She hadn’t seen him coming.

There hadn’t been much else to do, given the limited access they’d been granted to the compound. Talia hadn’t wandered much after her run in with J’arun, either, and had no interest to go looking for him – mostly because she wasn’t entirely sure if she had enough self-control left to stop herself from doing something stupid to him. So, she’d worked out a circuit between rooms to patrol, posting up beside a door or leaning against a wall for a while, then moved on to the next.

Then Hirek blessed her with his flyby – which completely derailed Talia’s growing paranoia.

What the, her brain fired off as Shadow visibly flinched; her feet remained rooted as her head turned to follow him, brow creased in equal parts confusion and shock. “Hirek,” the pilot asked aloud after he had kept on walking without so much as a glance at her; she just stood there, blinking.

Go after him, idiot, something told her – and for the first time, perhaps – Talia listened. Her boots clicked off the marbled floor as she drew alongside him in half a dozen quick strides. Another dozen or so steps passed as she thought about what to say; there were obviously eyes on them, even though everyone they passed seemed to not pay them any heed at all. Talia wanted to hug him, to tell him…well – none of that seemed actionable at the moment, for obvious reasons. He’d barely acknowledged her, after all…

Still, he’d thought enough about her to warrant an invite, at least.

”I…,” Talia whispered as low as she could, trying to move her lips as little as possible. “I don’t know if I can. I want to, obviously, but I don’t know if I should,” she spoke quickly, a tell-tale symptom of unfiltered speech. “These assholes are watching everything we do, and I don’t want to cause you or your family trouble. It’s good to see you too, by the way – I thought you were gone already. What’s happened, and why are you walking so fast?”
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Episode 02: Cosmic Imperative / Re: EPI S [Day 03 | 2330hrs.] Lay Your Weary Head To Rest
Last post by Dumedion -
[LT Arven Leux | CMO Office | Main Sickbay | Deck 11 | USS Theurgy] Attn: @RyeTanker @Ellen Fitz @Griff

He'd just sat down, collapsing into the seat at the workstation to palm tired eyes, trying to prep himself to tackle the mountain's worth of administrative tasks ahead. The chair felt wrong; the office even more so, due to the heavy scent of another person’s hygiene products, attire, personal belongings – none of which Arven had taken the time to catalog and box up – mostly because he simply hadn't had the energy to do so. Several medical files lay open upon the screen before him, tab upon tab of personnel dossiers in need of updates.

Several of them hadn’t survived the battle. Some had been wounded unto death, only to be interred in stasis. Most suffered through triage and surgeries to live another day. All of it required documentation; accurate records saved time – time saved lives – so the old saying went.

To think I used to enjoy paperwork, Luex knuckled his eyes with a groan, then sighed as he stretched the muscles of his neck and shoulders. Coffee first, he decided, otherwise I wont make it past the first handful. He needed to make a dent, while time allowed; buried somewhere in the queue was Ehfva’s file – the Vulpinian he’d just left with the Romulan, Hirek, only a moment ago. Arven’s clinical memory bordered on eidetic, but he was also self-aware of his own limitations; Cardassians had taught him that.

Unfortunately, the Doctor lost all train of thought as soon as he left the relative serenity of his inherited office. He was three steps into the sprint towards the ICU before his mind caught up to the onslaught of noise: screams and shouted words pitched in equal parts fear and panic – nothing normal, or especially pleasant to hear, coming from such a place.

By the time he skidded around the corner, the scene seemed eerily familiar: one patient trying to throttle another, while still another tried to intervene. Arven had seen it before, in another place under different circumstances; a time of failures and hard lessons learned.

This time, there was no hesitation – he never broke stride – while his mind raced for possible causalities and solutions. Zark could be Infested, sure; but she was certainly fresh from a chemically induced coma – which was never an easy or clean experience. Altered mental state, memory lapse, even full blown temporary psychosis were all documented side-effects.

Still – the Doctor valued thoroughness.

A hand snapped out to a control interface, triggering the anyonic light screening that the engineering crews had literally just installed; the omni-directional emitter hissed free from the ceiling and pulsed instantly, flooding the ICU with a flash of blinding light, (save for Arven, of course, whose wits remained well enough to squeeze his eyes closed). In the dazed confusion that followed, the Doctor managed three more steps to the side of Zark’s biobed to secure a hypospray – which he spent precious seconds programming with a potent antihistamine compound, tailored to Andorian physiology – from memory.

Of course, Arven realized he’d never reach Zark in the very next second; while the anyonic pulse had effectively blinded her visually – the Andorian possessed another sensory apparatus just as equally sensitive and far more acute: her antennae. Both of which swiveled towards Arven, quivering like the rattler's of a loathsome Terran serpent.

This is going to hurt, the Doctor’s mind drawled as a blur of blue and white-medical-gown flung itself directly at him.

Arven managed to raise his arms up in a half-assed attempt to defend himself just before the pain flared, too fast for his nervous system to truly process: pressure and heat bloomed in his sinuses, flooded his mouth. The world tumbled. His arm was wrenched back and up – too fast – the pressure unimaginably abrupt. Someone screamed, as multiple pops and wet cracks filled the air; the world tumbled again, and then the Doctor realized he had somehow ended up pinned to the deck, unable to breathe.

His arm, twisted into a mockery of wrong angles, was being used as a living lever gripped in blue talons, while the knee on his windpipe pressed in; of all the ways to die – the Doctor never imagined this one. Through vision that swam in equal parts red and grey, Arven searched Zark’s face for any sign of mercy or recognition.

He saw neither. He couldn’t speak. Couldn’t breathe. Couldn’t think...but somehow, he’d held onto the hypo through the assault. He felt it, in his hand…or at least his dying, oxygen starved brain believed it did. Everything was turning black though – he couldn’t control his own body accurately anymore.

That didn’t stop him from trying, though.
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